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  1. Hi Gouthami, Nice to see u again writing other.
    This was good, heavy concentrating on rhyming, right.
    Rhymes are just words, poetry is feeling.
    Poetry is something which doesn't follow any rules, any rules.
    Follow your heart, write what comes in the first. Follow your own set of rules.
    Disclaimer: If you have written on that way, then this was fantastic.
    All the best.

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